16 May CAN YOU RE-ARRANGE THE ESSAY SO IT FOLLOWS THE ASSIGNMENT SHEET?
No, Monique, it is not okay because you are not following the instructions. Form 1 is your introduction once you make the corrections. You are putting too much information in the introduction that does not belong there. I thought one of your questions, at least from the draft of form 1, is, what is telemedicine? You explain the term in paragraph 1, rather than asking the question and explaining it in paragraph 2, from your source, which is what you should do. You need to follow the guidelines, use the corrected information from form 1 as your introduction and draft the remaining paragraphs and either give it to me in class today, or email it to me by tomorrow. Once I receive the full draft, according to the instructions, I will be better able to advise how to improve it.
that is the email from the teacher after I sent her the draft
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